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September 1, 2017
Summer Depression/Half Smile (Season 1) by emilywrites
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Literature Text
dread, despair, and disgust suffuses across my synapses
as the sun intrudes into my darkened room guilting me for taking the day for granted
I pull the covers over my head cocooning my body
my pulse increases, my chest hurts, my stomach churns, and my mind spins
at the thought of exposing myself
panic overwhelms me like a wave crashing down
caught off guard fear rushes into my lungs instead of air
the thought of facing my energetic and happy co-workers terrifies me
the voice in my head cruelly whispers
they will find you out
they will see your thankless shadow
they will sense your dis-ease
the sun then glares as if to ask me how dare I stay in bed
it points out there are sun filled adventures ahead
fresh air to breathe
nourishing vitamin D to absorb
tans to aquire
swimsuits to model
lush green trails to admire
parties to attend
music to dance to
holidays to celebrate
planes to ride
friends and family to visit
the heat then rises with the sun as if to increase my discomfort
I sweat under the sheets
my tongue is dry inside my mouth
I deny myself water
I procrastinate showering
I shrink
I pray to God that I please disappear
I then hear footsteps
the lock clicks
and my sister is home from work
and I’m still in bed
guilt floods my mind
she playfully peeks under my covers
she climbs under to hug and cuddle me
she encourages me to enjoy the day
I smile to reassure her as I hold back the tears pooling behind my eyes
all I want is for her to be happy
all I want is for her to have a normal sister
finally the tears flow with the water in the shower
fatigue fills up my feet with every step
my heart feels heavy as I brush my teeth and hair
mechanically I apply make-up, then sunblock
I put on a swimsuit
we drive to the beach
and my mind is paralyzed
I can’t think of a single word to say
as my sister cheerfully chatters
my sister smells the salty air
she hears the relaxing repetition of the waves
she feel the warmth of the sun as we lie on the sand
and all I can think of is how empty I feel
fog is clouding my vision
everything to me feels dreamlike and shallow
everything feels like a prop
I’m afraid if I reach out and touch anything it will tip over
nothing and no one feels real to me
everything seems predictable and scripted
my heart races at the possibility that I made all this up in my head
I catastrophize
my monstrous thoughts murmur distorted stories
I spiral downwards into delusion
as I desperately focus on my half smile
as the sun intrudes into my darkened room guilting me for taking the day for granted
I pull the covers over my head cocooning my body
my pulse increases, my chest hurts, my stomach churns, and my mind spins
at the thought of exposing myself
panic overwhelms me like a wave crashing down
caught off guard fear rushes into my lungs instead of air
the thought of facing my energetic and happy co-workers terrifies me
the voice in my head cruelly whispers
they will find you out
they will see your thankless shadow
they will sense your dis-ease
the sun then glares as if to ask me how dare I stay in bed
it points out there are sun filled adventures ahead
fresh air to breathe
nourishing vitamin D to absorb
tans to aquire
swimsuits to model
lush green trails to admire
parties to attend
music to dance to
holidays to celebrate
planes to ride
friends and family to visit
the heat then rises with the sun as if to increase my discomfort
I sweat under the sheets
my tongue is dry inside my mouth
I deny myself water
I procrastinate showering
I shrink
I pray to God that I please disappear
I then hear footsteps
the lock clicks
and my sister is home from work
and I’m still in bed
guilt floods my mind
she playfully peeks under my covers
she climbs under to hug and cuddle me
she encourages me to enjoy the day
I smile to reassure her as I hold back the tears pooling behind my eyes
all I want is for her to be happy
all I want is for her to have a normal sister
finally the tears flow with the water in the shower
fatigue fills up my feet with every step
my heart feels heavy as I brush my teeth and hair
mechanically I apply make-up, then sunblock
I put on a swimsuit
we drive to the beach
and my mind is paralyzed
I can’t think of a single word to say
as my sister cheerfully chatters
my sister smells the salty air
she hears the relaxing repetition of the waves
she feel the warmth of the sun as we lie on the sand
and all I can think of is how empty I feel
fog is clouding my vision
everything to me feels dreamlike and shallow
everything feels like a prop
I’m afraid if I reach out and touch anything it will tip over
nothing and no one feels real to me
everything seems predictable and scripted
my heart races at the possibility that I made all this up in my head
I catastrophize
my monstrous thoughts murmur distorted stories
I spiral downwards into delusion
as I desperately focus on my half smile
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I've been having writers block. Many of you have suggested cures for that. I felt most inspired by writing poems based on the seasons. I want to thank Zilzalisme for suggesting that. I will be writing a fall, winter, and spring poem as well. I also want to thank all of you for your suggestions. I will most likely use all of them with time.
So this poem is about depression like most of my poems are. I can't help it since I specialize in it LOL. I usually let my poems flow out of me without creating a theme or a plan. I guess what I really emphasize in this one is how well people that suffer from depression try to hide and cover it up. It is a really painful experience. It's not a positive poem, even though that is what I want to write. I do want there to be a positive outcome though. So if anyone who is suffering from depression reads or if anyone is looking for ways to help out someone who is close that is suffering I want you to know you are not alone, and you can always send me a note. I have lots of advice on how to cope, maybe too much advice. I wish you all happiness. Emily
So this poem is about depression like most of my poems are. I can't help it since I specialize in it LOL. I usually let my poems flow out of me without creating a theme or a plan. I guess what I really emphasize in this one is how well people that suffer from depression try to hide and cover it up. It is a really painful experience. It's not a positive poem, even though that is what I want to write. I do want there to be a positive outcome though. So if anyone who is suffering from depression reads or if anyone is looking for ways to help out someone who is close that is suffering I want you to know you are not alone, and you can always send me a note. I have lots of advice on how to cope, maybe too much advice. I wish you all happiness. Emily
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Again you´re just irresolute, I have to broach the subject again A shopping list for life? Too little money to get all that? Words!!!! Depression is a sharp dressed fag, you never owe! Hopefully you never get depressed properly, I said earlier. You might have some alienation, quite sure in fact. The snake will reach a higher point one day, maybe it lasts 4 decades more. Just stay and play. The earlier you will be independent, the earlier life will be there. Forget about love. Forget about friends. Forget about idols, well keep them in mind. And so much more... Yeah, kill all teachers at least (only in your mind, selfevidently). Haha as far as I can construe your list/poem, the world is already snowballing you, isn´t it?